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Is there any rhyme scheme?

Nah.

Any consistent meter pattern within a single verse?

Not...really?

Shannon density?


Low.

How would you even describe this?

I'm not sure. To some extent it starts out like a "zipper song" where you substitute in different pairs of contrasting words, but then the different verses diverge into different things that God does. The first few measures look kind of minor-y (sad) but then it progresses to major, I think, which I guess fits with the lyrics. I suspect it's too slow/somber to fit into the praise genre but I've never sung it so who knows.
What is the allusion here?

To the Maundy Thursday story (at least in John) where Jesus washes his disciples' feet. This is considered gross and taboo but Jesus is like "no, I gotta do it, and maybe this will give you a hint as to how to treat others."

Any others?


It's vague, but "neighbors are...varied in color and race" could be a reference to the Good Samaritan (which we read today so it was on my mind). Jesus makes the point of "sometimes the neighbor you're supposed to love is someone from a hated outgroup, deal."

Have the lyrics changed since the last edition?


Yeah. The first verse now reads "master who acts as a slave for them" instead of "pours out himself." I suspect this is a revert to the original in an effort to be more on-point and the previous version I knew was an adaptation dismissed as too wishy-washy?
Where's the justice relevance?

We don't really get there until the third verse, which summarizes the story of Jesus saying "whenever you show mercy to sick/hungry/imprisoned/naked people, you do so to me." That's social progress.

What's the rest of it, then?

We get the weirdly-Calvinistic "never grudging for the lost ones that tremendous sacrifice" (of Jesus). And then verse 2 is kind of cliche-y, I think "sunshine of your goodness" would be considered a little too cutesy in some corners. (I try to keep an open mind but it's not all that moving even for me.)

Is the melody catchy at least?

Yeah, especially the last couple lines. It seems to flow well in and out of other songs with similar meters so sometimes I'll be earwormed by something else and go "oh, that's Hyfrydol."
Why does this song have a subtitle?

Because it's also in Spanish and that's the alternate-language title. Not all the translated songs have subtitles, maybe just the ones with other languages present in this text? We'll see.

Is the translation good?

To my knowledge, yes. My Spanish is middling at best, but it's the only other language I know, so. Since the original doesn't rhyme, there wasn't much need to bend the translation to make it fit.

The one thing that stood out to me was Un pueblo que busca en esta vida/la gran liberación becomes "the people who long to claim the promise, God's liberating word." The liberating part makes sense, but "busca en esta vida" would literally translate as "seek in this life." Is this a social justice (in the original sense) focused message of "don't worry about heaven, change the world here?"

Any cool (bilingual) turns of phrase?


"El mundo, por la guerra, sangra sin razón," rendered as "The lifeblood of the world is shed in mindless war," is pretty neat.
What is "crown your ancient church's story"?

Not sure about that. It seems to be saying God is about to cap off the millennia-long history of the church with something imminent, but I don't really see why contemporary evils would warrant any more intervention than some of the other crises that have come and gone. Then again, there are several Bible verses about "this current [~30 AD] generation will see the end of the world as we know it, etc." that kind of get swept under the rug, so some quantity of time dilation may be in effect.

That's about it, although I like "save us from weak resignation" as a turn of phrase.

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