#415: Father Most Holy
Dec. 31st, 2019 10:18 pmHow are the feminine rhymes?
They start out pretty good (tender/defender, unshaken/forsaken), and then just...trail off.
The syllable count breakdown might play into that a little. Nominally it's 11-11-11-5, with the first and third lines rhyming, and the second and (short) fourth lines, at least for the first couple verses. But really, those 11s are each more like 5+6, so the last 5 is rhyming with the 6 part of the 5-6. Because of this, it might be "easier" to get rhymes for the first and third lines, because they match each other in length, and we sort of see that in the last verse (glory/adore thee). The effect is weird, though, because it's much more common to have a rhyme scheme of XAYA (the second and fourth lines rhyme with each other, the first and third don't rhyme with anything) than AXAY (the other way around)--since mostly we're listening for a rhyme in the last line. But here we have the latter case.
This is the end of this section, but don't worry, there are lots and lots of hymns all over the place where the last verse is "praise to God the Father, Son, and Holy Spirit." "Trinitarian doxology"=big words in kids' choir hymn tangents.
They start out pretty good (tender/defender, unshaken/forsaken), and then just...trail off.
The syllable count breakdown might play into that a little. Nominally it's 11-11-11-5, with the first and third lines rhyming, and the second and (short) fourth lines, at least for the first couple verses. But really, those 11s are each more like 5+6, so the last 5 is rhyming with the 6 part of the 5-6. Because of this, it might be "easier" to get rhymes for the first and third lines, because they match each other in length, and we sort of see that in the last verse (glory/adore thee). The effect is weird, though, because it's much more common to have a rhyme scheme of XAYA (the second and fourth lines rhyme with each other, the first and third don't rhyme with anything) than AXAY (the other way around)--since mostly we're listening for a rhyme in the last line. But here we have the latter case.
This is the end of this section, but don't worry, there are lots and lots of hymns all over the place where the last verse is "praise to God the Father, Son, and Holy Spirit." "Trinitarian doxology"=big words in kids' choir hymn tangents.