#745: Lord, Teach Us How to Pray Aright
Sep. 4th, 2019 11:16 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
How's the rhyme scheme?
It's actually pretty dense, but sometimes this can be hidden by the flow of the text. Verse 3:
"Give deep humility; the sense of godly sorrow give; a strong desire, with confidence, to hear your voice and live."
It's actually pretty dense, but sometimes this can be hidden by the flow of the text. Verse 3:
"Give deep humility; the sense of godly sorrow give; a strong desire, with confidence, to hear your voice and live."
"sense" gets the musical stress, and rhymes with "confidence" in line 3. But based on how we punctuate it and would actually speak it as text, that gets hidden.
"Dust and ashes"?