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#453: Baptized and Set Free
This one is unusual because the title is actually the last line, rather than the first; almost everything has the title as the first line (which in some cases leads to a lot of near-duplicates. I did a long analysis of "where does the title show up in the lyrics" for my old blog...about a decade ago, it turns out. :o Time flies when you're being a nerd on the internet.
The rhyme scheme at the end is repetitive on the word level: "more/door/more," "need/indeed/need" etc, which doesn't really land for me. In addition, it ends with a "rest" (silent) measure, or rather 2/3 measure to make up for the pick-up note at the beginning. I feel like if it's silent, you don't really need to write it in. But maybe there's an instrumental part that goes there.
The rhyme scheme at the end is repetitive on the word level: "more/door/more," "need/indeed/need" etc, which doesn't really land for me. In addition, it ends with a "rest" (silent) measure, or rather 2/3 measure to make up for the pick-up note at the beginning. I feel like if it's silent, you don't really need to write it in. But maybe there's an instrumental part that goes there.